https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vca7FMJzEPY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlyFUxfcNnA
I some of my target audience what they think of my trailer and what improvements are needed to be made:
- Some shots in this trailer aren't necessary,so see which shots to keep/delete.
- Try and build suspense/mystery/enigma
- Change some of the transitions in trailer (simple fade to black)
- Think of different wording for the intertitles and using same text as 'Target' logo to keep a consistent theme.
- Need to make it more a short trailer rather than a short movie.
- Think about audio and soundtrack in trailer.
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